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Luigi_96, November 5th, 2013, 12:05 am ( Reply )


Seriously, I'm beyond dissatisfied with how this comic turned out from my initial concept of it. So I'm done pretending I like the plot, because truthfully, I've disliked it for a couple pages now.

So I guess I should just go ahead and state my overall reasons for this reboot.

Firstly, I just don't like the plot anymore.
Second, the characters. There are way too many OCs at the moment who shouldn't even be involved in the story! And that brings me to the third, related point,
The characterization. Seriously, I've been doing a horrible job at this, mainly because I've been focusing on the art, and everything else has been on the backburner, and to have a good comic, you've gotta have a good story.
Fourth, is oddly enough, the art. I just always think it looks horrible, not because I'm a bad artist, but because of the transition from paper to computer. The inked version never looks as good as the original sketch, and the digital version never looks as good as the inked version.

So I'm really not sure when I'll start this again, but rest assured, I'm not done with this idea, and I'm certainly not done drawing!

Ciao for now,


EDIT: For some reason, the image is sideways. *sigh*

EDIT 2: Fixed.

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@sconic123: It's for the best.

@Sapar: I probably will.

@Red kirby (guest): I'd say it was chapter 3.

@PurpleChickenPineapple: Miles represents the opinion of a certain mutual friend of ours. xD
As for keeping the old version, I'm going to, simply because the new version could be so vastly different, it just wouldn't fit.
Thank you very much! :D

@Mint612: Don't worry. The new version shall be great!

@TheTC: Sorry, it's already been decided. I'm already plotting out the new version!
And there are no sprites of Miles. Yet. xD

@Quirby64_:D: But you just wait 'til the next version!

@Therater2: Well, this is only the first comic I've drawn. I've gotten a lot of experience with sprite comics before (and probably after) this.

posted by Luigi_96 on November 5th, 2013, 12:10 am

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Well, if you want to. Not saying you HAVE to. But I'm that's not my say... *sniff*

posted by sconic123 on November 5th, 2013, 6:12 am

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Can you at least keep this comic here for us to read through? Just reboot in the form of another comic...

posted by Sapar on November 5th, 2013, 7:25 am

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@Luigi_96: Yeah, I haven't really liked the plot either. I'd say it's after Chapter 1 where things started to go down.

posted by Red kirby (Guest) on November 5th, 2013, 9:12 am

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Miles sure doesn't look happy about this.. XD

Still I say this is a fine route to take. Though I agree with Sapar and keeping the old version on the website.

I wish you good luck and lots of determination and inspiration! ^^

posted by PurpleChickenPineapple on November 5th, 2013, 4:57 pm

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We'll miss you....old version.

posted by Mint612 on November 5th, 2013, 8:31 pm

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@Luigi_96: I actually love your art, the plot twists are awesome, the characters may need more development, but the mysteriousness of it all is exciting, and the characterization is doing great so far! In other words, DON'T GIVE UP!

On a related note, it'd be AWESOME if someone could do a sprite version of this! Any takers?

posted by TheTC on November 6th, 2013, 10:03 am

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Umm...this is already great. ask someone and they'll say yes!

posted by Quirby64_:D on November 6th, 2013, 6:51 pm

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@Quirby64_:D: Yes!

I remember when I had to reboot my comic... My first comic wasn't nearly as good as this!

posted by Therater2 on November 10th, 2013, 7:12 am

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@Quirby64_:D: I'm asking YOU, in that case!

posted by TheTC on November 12th, 2013, 10:47 am

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This is what happens when I neglect to check your comic... ;n;

posted by Ecaroh914 on November 13th, 2013, 7:57 am

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@Ecaroh914: Nah. You couldn't have stopped it from happening.

posted by Luigi_96 on November 13th, 2013, 9:30 am

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You have too high standards, my comics never reaches the hight of this...*sniff*

posted by Omega Kirby on November 13th, 2013, 10:52 am

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@Omega Kirby: You should be glad my standards are high...

posted by Luigi_96 on November 13th, 2013, 1:22 pm

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@TheTC: waah! about waht!?! *shocked*

posted by Quirby64_:D on November 20th, 2013, 7:43 pm

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